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    Otaku Tithe may be famous one day Tithe may be famous one day Tithe's Avatar
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    The Old Man

    He sits in the Rack n shack
    Staring out
    Just looking through the glass at me
    I scribble poems and stare back

    In my mind he thinks of what he did
    Why he lost her
    Why he drinks away harsh memories
    A tear leaks out of his closed eyelid

    The one memory unsuppressed
    though it was drunk down and pushed away
    It bobbles back like a bottle in a black lake
    His hand now holds his forehead
    His emotion is no longer repressed
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    Otaku Kikieru may be famous one day Kikieru may be famous one day Kikieru's Avatar
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    Poor guy, having to endure you staring at him...just kidding..lol, pretty good,

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    Man, sounds like he hit it rough. Seem like when I use to be curled in the floor crying over NEVER being loved. Thank god, that's the past though. Nice job Tithe, keep it up.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Talking

    i liked the way you brought the guy to life ...i could see him tears and all
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