One Day Closer To You

One Day Closer To You

Every day is a waste…
Cause I’m there without you.
I waste my time,
And waste the work day.
Then come home and kill more time.
Then 7 o’ clock runs by,
And soon after,
I’m on the net.
Next thing I hear is *knock knock*,
And your screen name appears.
I type to you,
Tell you I love you,
And tell you I miss you daily.
You do the same.
I love you more than,
Anyone before you…
Because there has been none before you.
I tell you what,
I’d do when I go there,
And give you my all girl.
You have no idea what you do to me,
And how you’ve changed this man.
All I know is the man I am now,
Is the man that you desire.
I love you more each and every day.
So when I go to sleep here soon,
And close my eyes….
I can’t wait….
To waste another day.
…
Till I’m with you…..

By Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

and i can't wait until that day that i meet you and you stay with me forever.

wow dde...thats really good.

You are really good, honestly it's the best poem I've read so far here. Keeping in mind that I am new here. Still great work.

kool peom and keep it up

way to go dude kool poem!!!!!!!!!keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!

I can sense love and passion. Done nice and Easy. Its great.

It's very cute, real emotion! One critique I have is that it doesn't flow right. When you read it, everyline a pause between, it has no flow. :thumb: Thumbs up bud, hope you get the girl! (Or you already have.. either way kicks!)