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    One... Last... Time (Poem)

    I feel like a part of me is dying,
    laying down just crying.
    but here I sit,
    no real emotion in me,
    but a sadness is there.
    just a small flicker of pout,
    deep in my chest.
    nothing that stands out,
    but it's still lingering.
    because I have to say goodbye...
    why does a piece of me die?
    I'm happy...
    well sorta,
    but still pained,
    and my mind strained.
    parents suck,
    causing me this...
    all i need is my girlfriend's kiss.
    that'll fee me,
    release me,
    set me free.
    I'd be there with her,
    and never pain again.
    my love and hope,
    and true friend.
    why am I saying goodbye for now?
    haven't you figured it out?
    I have no time to stay,
    but I'll be back one day.
    This isn't goodbye for good.
    because I know I'll be back one day,
    but many might not care anyway.
    for my fans... the few there are,
    thanks for the support over these long months.
    as for the haters out there...
    may someday you see the error in your ways.
    as for the rest of you...
    i'm forever in AO.
    Till next time I arrive,
    this is goodbye!

    Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    hope you be back soon love ya
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    i hope everything works out for the best...ill miss your work!! keep a jurnal of poems and then post all of them when you return!!

    peace out and god speed

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    kool poem dude!!!!

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    One kiss shall let u free,
    wow tha's deep, tha's real deep, glad that u'r back, with less pain and sorow
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    very nice indeed.
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