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    Arrow this is for{P}

    this is for you
    the one who held me bac
    and kept me in chains
    till i cut them
    this is for you
    the one who hurt me
    more and more
    until someone came
    and took me away
    this is for
    everyone who never cared
    this is for
    every time
    you ignored me
    or hit me
    for every time tears rolled down
    why should i stay
    noone cares
    ad theres a better place
    waiting for me
    this is not a fight
    its abuse
    you want me dead
    and noone would ever notice
    id fade away
    like the stars at daybreak
    like snow after sunlight
    like sand in the dessert
    im a small piece of this
    this plan were all in
    noone will notice
    the wrld will keep spinning
    this is really for
    every time
    you made my world
    stop spinning
    good night
    good day
    good bye
    ill see you
    in paradise
    Last edited by animechick; May 18, 2005 at 07:15 PM. Reason: for got the {P}!!on title
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    This is going out for your 3 poems,

    You really had alot to say,
    i wish i was able to give you grace,

    im glad you ae sharing yourself with us fellow writers and readers,
    so please keep up your work for every human is his craft.

    -simple

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    To keep it short and clear, you greatly defined things loneliness and death. Things are getting better i see. Well done!

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    well one thing everyone needs to know
    eventually youll hit the bottom
    and you can fall any more
    so you have to climb
    even with broken legs
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    Its pretty good.. Try putting it in a different format so it doesnt look too long. Its really good!!
    -Maximum dimensions for signatures is 110(height)x450(width), maximum file size is 150kb. ONE IMAGE ONLY!

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    look what formating has done to the darkness{world}... everyone is the same and ppl treat individuality as a trend that has gone out of style- but thx for ur comment and time!!
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    you are a master of poems

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    we.... master maybe not...but i write from my experiences instead of iming about them...
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