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This is going out for your 3 poems,
You really had alot to say,
i wish i was able to give you grace,
im glad you ae sharing yourself with us fellow writers and readers,
so please keep up your work for every human is his craft.
-simple
this is for{P} this is for you
the one who held me bac
and kept me in chains
till i cut them
this is for you
the one who hurt me
more and more
until someone came
and took me away
this is for
everyone who never cared
this is for
every time
you ignored me
or hit me
for every time tears rolled down
why should i stay
noone cares
ad theres a better place
waiting for me
this is not a fight
its abuse
you want me dead
and noone would ever notice
id fade away
like the stars at daybreak
like snow after sunlight
like sand in the dessert
im a small piece of this
this plan were all in
noone will notice
the wrld will keep spinning
this is really for
every time
you made my world
stop spinning
good night
good day
good bye
ill see you
in paradise
Last edited by animechick; May 18, 2005 at 07:15 PM. Reason: for got the {P}!!on title
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This is going out for your 3 poems,
You really had alot to say,
i wish i was able to give you grace,
im glad you ae sharing yourself with us fellow writers and readers,
so please keep up your work for every human is his craft.
-simple
To keep it short and clear, you greatly defined things loneliness and death. Things are getting better i see. Well done!
well one thing everyone needs to know
eventually youll hit the bottom
and you can fall any more
so you have to climb
even with broken legs
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Its pretty good.. Try putting it in a different format so it doesnt look too long. Its really good!!
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look what formating has done to the darkness{world}... everyone is the same and ppl treat individuality as a trend that has gone out of style- but thx for ur comment and time!!
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you are a master of poems
we.... master maybe not...but i write from my experiences instead of iming about them...
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