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    Pain

    I lie on my pillow and cry.
    why am i like this again?
    why do i still hurt?
    why can't i be loved?
    kissed?
    adored?
    why?
    because no one knows who i am.
    not even the friends i have,
    know the darkness of my very soul.
    it's not that they don't care...
    they just never ask about my pain,
    until i cry out to them...
    then many leave.
    no goodbye's,
    no "See ya' laters",
    just a click and they're gone.
    ...
    so ends another day of pain.
    THIS HAS TO STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "The pain is real... and so am I. Believe it..."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Banned Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki's Avatar
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    Sounds familiar to me. Back in the old days. Nicely written and on some points you're straight right.

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    Nice one.

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    Great!!! Nice poem???!!!
    Last edited by deidre_the_goddess; Apr 12, 2005 at 12:29 AM.

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    Nice and emotional. Great writing and it was nicely formed.

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    Yes, a very nice peice of work. Good job.

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    Wow!!! It doesn't make me cry or anything, but I do feel your pain, and it is VERY deep! If it's no problem, I would LOVE to see some more poetry by you!

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    nice... i like it... i can relate.

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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