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Sounds familiar to me. Back in the old days. Nicely written and on some points you're straight right.
I lie on my pillow and cry.
why am i like this again?
why do i still hurt?
why can't i be loved?
kissed?
adored?
why?
because no one knows who i am.
not even the friends i have,
know the darkness of my very soul.
it's not that they don't care...
they just never ask about my pain,
until i cry out to them...
then many leave.
no goodbye's,
no "See ya' laters",
just a click and they're gone.
...
so ends another day of pain.
THIS HAS TO STOP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart) "The pain is real... and so am I. Believe it..."
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
Sounds familiar to me. Back in the old days. Nicely written and on some points you're straight right.
Nice one.
Great!!! Nice poem???!!!
Last edited by deidre_the_goddess; Apr 12, 2005 at 12:29 AM.
Nice and emotional. Great writing and it was nicely formed.
Yes, a very nice peice of work. Good job.
Wow!!! It doesn't make me cry or anything, but I do feel your pain, and it is VERY deep! If it's no problem, I would LOVE to see some more poetry by you!
nice... i like it... i can relate.
"Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
And cloudy-looking woods,
Whose forms we can't discover
For the tears that drip all over!
Huge moons there wax and wane-
Again- again- again-"
Edgar Allan Poe
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