IT RHYMES>>this poem says what it has to. very nice. Imverytired,so i give you a ten.
I worked real hard to make them
I thought I could fly
But when I jumped from that tree limb
I didn't touch the sky
Heartbroken in my corner
Tears flowing from my eyes
I felt like a foriegner
Blanketed in lies
Then all of a sudden
Something twinged
I felt my shirt unbutton
The back ripped and fringed
My back felt cold and moistened
Red and green staining my white shirt
I was floating as if hoistened
Cold liquid flowing down my skirt
Then I saw a twinkle
There were wings growing from my back!
As faery dust sprinkled
I thought now I can fly
Wings I do not lack
A deathless heart alive with greif
Smiles when it hears of thee
Whisper now my secret love
Kiss my lips and rise above
IT RHYMES>>this poem says what it has to. very nice. Imverytired,so i give you a ten.
I LOVE IT, ITS SO AWESOME, LOL, I FIND IT MOST ENJOYABLE, GJGJGJGJGJGJ! LoL....its very nice and it rhymes everywhere, very amazing![]()
Touching and nicely written. Good stuff
Nice work! Liked the image that was created in my head while reading it.![]()
Thanks! I hope to be a writer someday! I'm in the process of making my book.
A deathless heart alive with greif
Smiles when it hears of thee
Whisper now my secret love
Kiss my lips and rise above
Good job on the poem. It flowed very well.
WOW !!!!
I felt every word. It you're really something
Keep it up babe.
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