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    paper mache wings (poem)

    I worked real hard to make them
    I thought I could fly
    But when I jumped from that tree limb
    I didn't touch the sky

    Heartbroken in my corner
    Tears flowing from my eyes
    I felt like a foriegner
    Blanketed in lies

    Then all of a sudden
    Something twinged
    I felt my shirt unbutton
    The back ripped and fringed

    My back felt cold and moistened
    Red and green staining my white shirt
    I was floating as if hoistened
    Cold liquid flowing down my skirt

    Then I saw a twinkle
    There were wings growing from my back!
    As faery dust sprinkled
    I thought now I can fly
    Wings I do not lack

    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    IT RHYMES>>this poem says what it has to. very nice. Imverytired,so i give you a ten.

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    I LOVE IT, ITS SO AWESOME, LOL, I FIND IT MOST ENJOYABLE, GJGJGJGJGJGJ! LoL....its very nice and it rhymes everywhere, very amazing

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    Touching and nicely written. Good stuff

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    Nice work! Liked the image that was created in my head while reading it.

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    Thanks! I hope to be a writer someday! I'm in the process of making my book.
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    Good job on the poem. It flowed very well.

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    WOW !!!!
    I felt every word. It you're really something
    Keep it up babe.

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