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Old Feb 01, 2005, 05:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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paper mache wings (poem)

I worked real hard to make them
I thought I could fly
But when I jumped from that tree limb
I didn't touch the sky

Heartbroken in my corner
Tears flowing from my eyes
I felt like a foriegner
Blanketed in lies

Then all of a sudden
Something twinged
I felt my shirt unbutton
The back ripped and fringed

My back felt cold and moistened
Red and green staining my white shirt
I was floating as if hoistened
Cold liquid flowing down my skirt

Then I saw a twinkle
There were wings growing from my back!
As faery dust sprinkled
I thought now I can fly
Wings I do not lack

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Old Feb 01, 2005, 07:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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IT RHYMES>>this poem says what it has to. very nice. Imverytired,so i give you a ten.
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Old Feb 01, 2005, 09:12 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I LOVE IT, ITS SO AWESOME, LOL, I FIND IT MOST ENJOYABLE, GJGJGJGJGJGJ! LoL....its very nice and it rhymes everywhere, very amazing
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Old Feb 01, 2005, 11:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Touching and nicely written. Good stuff
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Old Feb 02, 2005, 03:08 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Nice work! Liked the image that was created in my head while reading it.
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Old Feb 02, 2005, 03:28 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks! I hope to be a writer someday! I'm in the process of making my book.
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Old Feb 02, 2005, 05:10 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Good job on the poem. It flowed very well.
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Old Feb 24, 2005, 05:00 AM   #8 (permalink)
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WOW !!!!
I felt every word. It you're really something
Keep it up babe.
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