Path of Blood
Blades own shine in baths of blood.
Blades fall down in puddles of mud.
I can't help those forsaken lives.
The powers I possess do not allow me to revive.
Those dead dreams that are no more.
All I have done is fight and watch the blood pour.
Clentching my teeth as I fall to my grave.
My own life spent for that I also could not save.
well, it was an alright poem...but seriously man, everquest sucks, try a new game. specifically one that u dont have to pay to use each month
That was kinda harsh. I don't think he wanted your opinion on his user name =/
Originally Posted by therealslimfatguy
I gotta get that cotton ball off my butt. I <3 T3H MONK3H!!!
Usually the people who make such comments about EverQuest or any MMORGame don't have a job and are still in high school. Or just don't make enough to want to put out the monthly fee. Its a argument that is well, on every gaming website out there. Being a tech, from my point of view I know why they charge a monthly fee. And I do not play EverQuest anymore, but this was my original AO nickname so I didn't want to change tradition. Anyways, I would appreciate constructive criticism to be placed on my work, not my choice in which nick name I chose.
that was an awesome poem and i'm not just saying that would you let me use it for school tommorow to read outloud?
Hahaha, you can use it freely just remember to add that it is not your original work ^_^
And thanks, I appreciate it that some AO'ers actually enjoyed this poem.
I'm all ears.
It's pretty good, exept the first two phrases, they don't seem to fit in with the rest.
It's always a + to have blood in you poem of course