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    Path of Blood

    Blades own shine in baths of blood.
    Blades fall down in puddles of mud.
    I can't help those forsaken lives.
    The powers I possess do not allow me to revive.

    Those dead dreams that are no more.
    All I have done is fight and watch the blood pour.
    Clentching my teeth as I fall to my grave.
    My own life spent for that I also could not save.

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    ummm ya

    well, it was an alright poem...but seriously man, everquest sucks, try a new game. specifically one that u dont have to pay to use each month

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    Quote Originally Posted by therealslimfatguy
    well, it was an alright poem...but seriously man, everquest sucks, try a new game. specifically one that u dont have to pay to use each month
    That was kinda harsh. I don't think he wanted your opinion on his user name =/
    I gotta get that cotton ball off my butt.
    I <3 T3H MONK3H!!!

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    Usually the people who make such comments about EverQuest or any MMORGame don't have a job and are still in high school. Or just don't make enough to want to put out the monthly fee. Its a argument that is well, on every gaming website out there. Being a tech, from my point of view I know why they charge a monthly fee. And I do not play EverQuest anymore, but this was my original AO nickname so I didn't want to change tradition. Anyways, I would appreciate constructive criticism to be placed on my work, not my choice in which nick name I chose.

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    that was an awesome poem and i'm not just saying that would you let me use it for school tommorow to read outloud?

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    if u read that aloud tomorrow in class they're going to think you're a pretty angry/depressed - dark guy..

    edit: then again, i suppose that could be the point


    The end is important in all things.

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    Hahaha, you can use it freely just remember to add that it is not your original work ^_^

    And thanks, I appreciate it that some AO'ers actually enjoyed this poem.

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    It's pretty good, exept the first two phrases, they don't seem to fit in with the rest.
    It's always a + to have blood in you poem of course

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