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It dosen't have a name yet, and I don't know if it's finished yet.
In the depts of my eyes
Somwhere deep inside my soul
There's a light that's fading fast
It's soon to be no more
Darkness comes to call
Knocking on the door
It holds a universal key to the heart
I've tried to lock it out
But sadness and lonelyness always seem to endur
If I was only stronger...
It I only could keep the monster out....
But I'm weak inside
I can't climb out
-White_Mage88
Its good!, not bad either
It was good, but why so short. Nothing else to say. I did like what you had right there thou.
I Loved Your Poem so much I'm a new fan
what rave said. i like it but it is kinda short but i cant complane cus all mine are short to
Rave said he/she said they weren't finished:thumb:Quote:
Originally Posted by bloodhawk
I liked that it was short. very intriguing ^_^
it was good.:thumb: i like the style of ur poem. and i kinda prefer short poems- takes much less time to read. but on the other hand, some of the greatest poems r long ones. like the ones Edgar allan poe wrote.