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    Poem...

    It dosen't have a name yet, and I don't know if it's finished yet.

    In the depts of my eyes
    Somwhere deep inside my soul
    There's a light that's fading fast
    It's soon to be no more

    Darkness comes to call
    Knocking on the door
    It holds a universal key to the heart
    I've tried to lock it out
    But sadness and lonelyness always seem to endur

    If I was only stronger...
    It I only could keep the monster out....
    But I'm weak inside
    I can't climb out

    -White_Mage88

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    Re: Poem...

    Its good!, not bad either

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    Re: Poem...

    It was good, but why so short. Nothing else to say. I did like what you had right there thou.
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    I Loved Your Poem so much I'm a new fan


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    Re: Poem...

    what rave said. i like it but it is kinda short but i cant complane cus all mine are short to

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    Re: Poem...

    Quote Originally Posted by bloodhawk
    what rave said. i like it but it is kinda short but i cant complane cus all mine are short to
    Rave said he/she said they weren't finished


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    Re: Poem...

    I liked that it was short. very intriguing ^_^
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    Re: Poem...

    it was good. i like the style of ur poem. and i kinda prefer short poems- takes much less time to read. but on the other hand, some of the greatest poems r long ones. like the ones Edgar allan poe wrote.

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