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a poem i've only jst came up with so bear with me.
is this real?
is this love i feel?
or am i falling to my death?
intised by your scented breath?
am i becoming more myself?
or am i putting me on the shelf?
is this real?
is this you i feel?
in me?
ok i know it's short, but here's something you might like, it's about you guys.
...yeah...
I liked it,not that my opnion really matters but i liked it.Some people dislike shorter poems but i like all of them with some angst part to them
:lurk: Brent
your opinion counts to me, thanks for the input.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mrs.Sesshomaru
I like it short, but the lines have meaning in them making it hard to ignore. Very cryptic and lovely...good job.
It's not bad really, puncuation might have made it a tad better.
that ture. your opinoin count