kool poem dude keep it up!!^^!!
there are no words to speak my mind
there are no minds to think what I have thought
there is no thought that can be understood
or wisdom to know it.
there is no camera that can show what i see
there no waves on a windy sea
there isn't a moment different from the one before
and no science to express it
!@#$%^&*())(*&^%$#@!
the pain is deep inside
it makes me want to cry
all these robots i see
living self-destructive fantasy
bones are breaking in my head
whats left of me is now dead
people wondering what could be
forgetting truth and reality
calming winds escape my soul
blowing deep through the holes
but here i sit in this land
words breeding from my hand
realizing there is nothing to
understand.
[J]
kool poem dude keep it up!!^^!!
good job jao, i'm really digging this one here. Nice stuff
very nice poem.![]()
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I won't let this world exist without me! If I die, we all die! / Avatar & Signature by anime_8000.
Thanks Narr..and everyone who read it.
Worst part is I promised myself I wouldn't write again...
That lasted. :S
[J]
baby, never stop writing!! its the only civil way to let out emotions with out hurting someone ot yourself!! dont stop wat comes natural!!
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good poem and I agree with animechick. You should never stop, especially someone as good as you![]()
"I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
-Unknown
good work on it
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