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    [Poem]

    there are no words to speak my mind
    there are no minds to think what I have thought
    there is no thought that can be understood
    or wisdom to know it.

    there is no camera that can show what i see
    there no waves on a windy sea
    there isn't a moment different from the one before
    and no science to express it

    !@#$%^&*())(*&^%$#@!

    the pain is deep inside
    it makes me want to cry
    all these robots i see
    living self-destructive fantasy

    bones are breaking in my head
    whats left of me is now dead
    people wondering what could be
    forgetting truth and reality

    calming winds escape my soul
    blowing deep through the holes
    but here i sit in this land
    words breeding from my hand
    realizing there is nothing to
    understand.



    [J]

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    kool poem dude keep it up!!^^!!

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    good job jao, i'm really digging this one here. Nice stuff

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    very nice poem.
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    Thanks Narr..and everyone who read it.

    Worst part is I promised myself I wouldn't write again...

    That lasted. :S

    [J]

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    baby, never stop writing!! its the only civil way to let out emotions with out hurting someone ot yourself!! dont stop wat comes natural!!
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    good poem and I agree with animechick. You should never stop, especially someone as good as you
    "I never stopped loving you, I just stopped letting it show."
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    good work on it

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