[poem] A Broken Ankle And A Heart Of The Same Condition

A Broken Ankle And A Heart Of The Same Condition
by Pyro Mike

You said you cared,
but it came out a lie.
You said "I love you,"
but it was another guy.
The only truth you've told,
was that "Goodbye!"

I said I cared,
and thought you did.
I said "I love you,"
like a lovestruck kid.
The only lie I told,
was "To hell and good rid!"

You went on a date,
but flirted with boys.
You tried to kiss me,
but always made a noise.
The only thing you were good for,
was giving false joys.

I went on a date,
and I never looked away.
I tried to kiss you,
and watched you sway.
The only thing I was bad for,
was being blind till this day.

You already knew,
what I realized.
You yelled,
but me too.
You pushed,
and I fell.
You left me a broken ankle,
and a heart of the same condition.

very nice...good work :thumb:

:) nice work i like that good job :thumb:

Your poem has got a great rhythm to it. Good structure as well. ::applauds:: Lovely.

Also...LOVE your title. :3

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Well, well, well so pyro mike has great passion for poems, i tought you were a tuff guy, anyways, nice poem i like it.

OMG! Did she really break your ankle?! Omg, anyway, VERY NICE WORK! :] I can't do better myself! I hope your ankle heals soon (if it's really broken.) and your heart will mend. Don't worry, there are lots of girls out there who will cherish you! :]

Its a funny story, this isn't based on anything, but I did write this after I got rejected and broke my ankle in the same day. So I thought of the title, and decided to write a poem around it.