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    Post [Poem] Demon Within

    The scared, panicky feeling you get when your all alone in the dark,
    the tingling, numbness when you just don't quite feel safe.
    The relaxing, nurturing feeling you long for when something goes horribly wrong,
    The thing you feel you fear the most but yet are not aware.

    That certain time of night when your about to fall asleep,
    that your awakened by a sound that was never really caused.
    When at home in your bed where everything feels at peace,
    it is right there beside you, never able to escape from it.

    The Darkness that lingers forever in your soul,
    to be concieled, held back, and withdrawn from sight.
    The true you that you hate and wish away,
    the you that will never turn and leave you be.

    The "other side" of the mirror,
    the reflection that will never fade,
    the one you wish to cut-off the most,
    with some mystical type of blade,
    the one who is loved and hated,
    the one who is most betrayed,
    is it them, or is it you,
    that is that Demon Within
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    i liked that it was beautiful. *snffels* lol :3
    Naruto rocks! ~.^

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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    wow dude that was a great poem, i see that you are going through something dark( i guess, just kidding). lol

    PS: dude can i have your autograph.lol

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    lol :3 *snickers*
    Naruto rocks! ~.^

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    wow, nice stuff! I really like the emotion you slapped into this one here. Keep it up

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    As a reply to Ketaro, yes, your right, this poem was meant to be dark because there is nothing wrong with dark and i wanted to take a little spin on it, ya know? i mean think about it, what is dark but the reflection of light? (total deepness here) it's something im just startin to get into i think, AnimeAficianado-The Lonely Wandering Gunslinger, I'm starting to get a gimmick, and im likin it. Thx guys, ill be sure to get to work on my next one in a few hours, ill be on all night as usual so, if not today it shouldn't be too long, tomorrow definately...

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    Quote Originally Posted by narrator
    wow, nice stuff! I really like the emotion you slapped into this one here. Keep it up
    I would have to agree I mean Wow keep up the good work

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    I never saw you here before , oh wel........

    Indeed it's a great poem.

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