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May 14, 2005, 11:52 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO  Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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 Credits: 210 |  [Poem] Life-An AnimeAficianado work in progress Life, such is life, what is life? what is this called life? A body? A mind? A soul? A heartfelt feeling? A love? Love, what is love? A partner? A relationship? A close friend? A crush? The things we take for granted, the things we hold most dear. The things we use then through away with out a care in the world. The things we have, had, wait for, wish for, all to be accepted or denied? What is life but the life, to century, to year, to month, to day, to hour, to minute, to second you live for... wait for... wish for... Life is your world, to shape, and bend, and twist, to whatever you wish to make of it. Do not waste your life, use it, follow it, lead it, live it.
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May 15, 2005, 12:13 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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Credits: 210 | Is anyone in need of help? Sorry guys, could someone please reply? i would like to know what ya think. It's been on all day... is it that bad?
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May 15, 2005, 12:18 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  | You asked me to reply but, i dont do poetry. Specially not the unrhyming kind. Freeform poems are just writing, they arnt poems. Its like me saying this post is a poem, yes, a cool breeze and a withering leaf. yeah im real damn poetic. Now that im done bashing on the style.....like i said, i didnt reply because i dont really do poetry, not ANY kind. I dont dislike, or like, poems. They just arnt something im into. So i really dunno what to say.
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May 15, 2005, 12:28 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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Credits: 210 | thx hey i dont really care if your into it or not, i just feel good to get a reply cause it makes me think someone is atleast lookin at my work,good or bad, or not at all, im just glad when i get replies. thx TallonKarrde23
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May 15, 2005, 01:17 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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Credits: 210 | sorry, i was waitin all day right next to the computer hitin refresh just to see if anything changed yet, can ya tell how obsessed and spazzy i am today? i need to calm down, but at night like now, im fine, all my abundant energy is spent from the day...
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May 15, 2005, 04:56 AM
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ok tallon, im sorry but i just havev to get this off my chest....poetry most definitely DOES NOT have to rhyme...  there is poetry, which can be free verse or stnadard.... and then there's prose. like what I'm writing write now. If i started using metaphores and adjectives right now, that would just make it descriptive prose... not poetry... Poetry is a certain way of writing and is very flexible since it comes from the heart and can be very varied and twisted from the origonal standard form.... now that I have thAT off my chest, nice poem, AnimeAficiando, keep it up and... PLEASE don't think you have to rhyme.... if you try to force something when u write it will become crap.... trust me..... I have had a similar experience
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May 15, 2005, 05:40 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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Credits: 210 | thx for the clearin up you did, i knew it coud be free verse, its what i write, but thanks for the advice, ill remember that when im writin my next poem thx again...
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May 15, 2005, 06:11 AM
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| The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO)
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Credits: 210 | That would be amazing, thx man, but me, no way i'd be Shakespeare, i go for my own feelings and to express them, thats all you need for a good poem. but seriously, thx for the good reviews guys! Thank you all very much...
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