thx for the clearin up you did, i knew it coud be free verse, its what i write, but thanks for the advice, ill remember that when im writin my next poem thx again...
May 15, 2005 06:46 AM #10
great poem dude, you should become the next shakespear ( sorry if i spelled it wrong). lol!!!!!!!!!!
May 15, 2005 07:11 AM #11
That would be amazing, thx man, but me, no way i'd be Shakespeare, i go for my own feelings and to express them, thats all you need for a good poem. but seriously, thx for the good reviews guys! Thank you all very much...
May 15, 2005 07:39 AM #12
your welcome man, keep it up. lol
May 15, 2005 12:01 PM #13
Originally Posted by RavenMoon13
Dude, i even SAID I KNOW THAT THERES 'FREEFORM POETRY' . If you read my post, you would have noticed that i said that i realize its "technically" a form of poetry. But i dont consider it one because its crap, its just writing. Its like me saying an essay i wrote is a poem just because i typed it
and yeah, like i said in my original post. I know its a style, i just dislike it. So no need to "explain" how it is one, because i already said i know its one.
And as for your poem, see you just needed to wait for responses lol. And once again, its alright, i just dont really know how to comment on things like these
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May 15, 2005 12:08 PM #14
Gotcha, thx, ill be sure to wait from now on, i just get so picky with my work i cant wait for a review to hear what someone thinks the second i hear something bad i spaz out and try to fix it cause im finicky like that, ya know? well, like i said, thx anyway...
May 15, 2005 12:20 PM #15