[Poem] Light, Darkness, and Truth

*AnimeAficianado* · May 13, 2005, 03:29 PM

Light, the light, so bright, luminice, revealing, holy celestial being,

Darkness, such darkness, endless black, concieling, evil eyes stalking in the darkness,

Truth, yes the truth, relaxing, comforting, the defining element,

Those who wish to know the truth must seek it,
Those who know the truth are blessed,
Those who think they know the truth, who believe they are in the light...
will only be left in the dark, to be consumed, ever wandering, seeking the truth yet even longer than others, who only wish to know for themselves, not to show that they know.

This is my first poem on AO and it's also one of my first recorded works I am doing. I hope I get some good feedback but i'm open to anysuggestions. Heres an explanation for those who don't understand the meaning behind it... It's supposed to teach a lesson, that you shouldn't act like you know everything, instead learn it and then you don't have to act smart... a lesson I had to learn personally. I hope you all like this poem and can't wait to post my next work!

*AnimeAficianado* · May 13, 2005, 05:57 PM

i know no one has to but i would like to know what everyone thinks, please reply when you read this the next time ok? Please?

RavenMoon13 · May 13, 2005, 07:28 PM

i actually really like it, it's a good poem and great message keep it up

*ketaro* · May 13, 2005, 07:31 PM

holy cow, this is a great poem dude, keep it up. you should become a politician man.lol

*AnimeAficianado* · May 13, 2005, 07:39 PM

Thanks guys, i didn't know if it was too deep or not-lol! im glad you liked it so much, ill be sure to get right on my next one! thx again!

!lord nikon · May 13, 2005, 11:58 PM

Hey you again, well its a nice poem indeed.

*ketaro* · May 14, 2005, 05:21 AM

well the poem is indeed good lol.

*Wrath* · May 15, 2005, 03:11 PM

I like it alot!! What a nice sense of creativity. Keep it up....

*kenshi2885* · May 16, 2005, 06:18 PM

wel-done nice work keep it coming

May 13, 2005, 03:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
AnimeAficianado The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO) Posts: 379 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	[Poem] Light, Darkness, and Truth Light, the light, so bright, luminice, revealing, holy celestial being, Darkness, such darkness, endless black, concieling, evil eyes stalking in the darkness, Truth, yes the truth, relaxing, comforting, the defining element, Those who wish to know the truth must seek it, Those who know the truth are blessed, Those who think they know the truth, who believe they are in the light... will only be left in the dark, to be consumed, ever wandering, seeking the truth yet even longer than others, who only wish to know for themselves, not to show that they know. This is my first poem on AO and it's also one of my first recorded works I am doing. I hope I get some good feedback but i'm open to anysuggestions. Heres an explanation for those who don't understand the meaning behind it... It's supposed to teach a lesson, that you shouldn't act like you know everything, instead learn it and then you don't have to act smart... a lesson I had to learn personally. I hope you all like this poem and can't wait to post my next work!
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May 13, 2005, 05:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
AnimeAficianado The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO) Posts: 379 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Please reply? i know no one has to but i would like to know what everyone thinks, please reply when you read this the next time ok? Please? __________________ Last edited by AnimeAficianado; May 13, 2005 at 06:27 PM.
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May 13, 2005, 07:28 PM	#3 (permalink)
RavenMoon13 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: fl Posts: 48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	i actually really like it, it's a good poem and great message keep it up __________________ "Dim vales- and shadowy floods- And cloudy-looking woods, Whose forms we can't discover For the tears that drip all over! Huge moons there wax and wane- Again- again- again-" Edgar Allan Poe
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May 13, 2005, 07:31 PM	#4 (permalink)
ketaro kitty Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,221 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,200	holy cow, this is a great poem dude, keep it up. you should become a politician man.lol
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May 13, 2005, 07:39 PM	#5 (permalink)
AnimeAficianado The un-tapped poet of AO Join Date: May 2005 Location: No big speach... i'm gone. who knows, ill probably be back eventualy ^-^ (takin a break from AO) Posts: 379 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Thanks guys, i didn't know if it was too deep or not-lol! im glad you liked it so much, ill be sure to get right on my next one! thx again! __________________
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May 13, 2005, 11:58 PM	#6 (permalink)
!lord nikon Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: NOWHERE Posts: 1,229 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Hey you again, well its a nice poem indeed.
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May 14, 2005, 05:21 AM	#7 (permalink)
ketaro kitty Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,221 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,200	well the poem is indeed good lol.
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May 15, 2005, 03:11 PM	#8 (permalink)
Wrath AO Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: None of your business!! Posts: 207 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	I like it alot!! What a nice sense of creativity. Keep it up.... __________________ -Maximum dimensions for signatures is 110(height)x450(width), maximum file size is 150kb. ONE IMAGE ONLY!
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May 16, 2005, 06:18 PM	#9 (permalink)
kenshi2885 AO Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Inside the physical body Posts: 219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	wel-done nice work keep it coming
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