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    Post [Poem] Light, Darkness, and Truth

    Light, the light, so bright, luminice, revealing, holy celestial being,

    Darkness, such darkness, endless black, concieling, evil eyes stalking in the darkness,

    Truth, yes the truth, relaxing, comforting, the defining element,

    Those who wish to know the truth must seek it,
    Those who know the truth are blessed,
    Those who think they know the truth, who believe they are in the light...
    will only be left in the dark, to be consumed, ever wandering, seeking the truth yet even longer than others, who only wish to know for themselves, not to show that they know.


    This is my first poem on AO and it's also one of my first recorded works I am doing. I hope I get some good feedback but i'm open to anysuggestions. Heres an explanation for those who don't understand the meaning behind it... It's supposed to teach a lesson, that you shouldn't act like you know everything, instead learn it and then you don't have to act smart... a lesson I had to learn personally. I hope you all like this poem and can't wait to post my next work!

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    Unhappy Please reply?

    i know no one has to but i would like to know what everyone thinks, please reply when you read this the next time ok? Please?
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    i actually really like it, it's a good poem and great message keep it up

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    holy cow, this is a great poem dude, keep it up. you should become a politician man.lol

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    Thanks guys, i didn't know if it was too deep or not-lol! im glad you liked it so much, ill be sure to get right on my next one! thx again!

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    Hey you again, well its a nice poem indeed.

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    well the poem is indeed good lol.

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    I like it alot!! What a nice sense of creativity. Keep it up....
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