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    a poem of love (poem)

    with my head on your chest,
    you charm me to rest,
    with my head on your chest,
    with the warmth of your breast.

    With my head on your chest,
    I hear your steady heartbeat,
    with my head on your chest,
    and it lulls me to sleep.

    And i dream,
    of you,
    and i dream,
    of the things you do.
    and i dream,
    of what we are,
    and i dream,
    of our future.

    As i wake,
    i slowly realise,
    as i wake,
    the dream is our lives.
    As i wake,
    i see your beautiful face
    as i wake,
    i go and taste

    your lips,
    your eyes,
    your ears,
    your thighs,
    i love every part of you
    and i love everything you do
    because you are my everything.

    a poem for kirstie
    i am the urban monky
    look to the mune

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    kool peom and keep up with the good work

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    with the warmth of your breast.
    I go an Taste... I love every part of you.
    Nicely done. Good job.

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    wow nice poem, keep it up man!!!

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    thank you all, and whats wrong with breast? oh have i spelled it wrong? well nm you get the idea.
    oh she wrote a reply, she would have posted it herself but she doesn't go here as she isn'ty a anime fan.

    Sitting alone,
    Thinking of you,
    I hated being alone,
    But now I have you.

    Thoughts in my head,
    Collect around you,
    As I lie in my bed,
    And think of you.

    Subconscious messages,
    I hope you receive,
    Else there is no point in this,
    Its all for my creative greed.
    For now ill sit and wait,
    Holding on for a reply,
    Of knowing that you love me,
    I sit alone and sigh.

    One day you will realize,
    How much I love having you on my side,
    But until that day arrives,
    Ill sit and dream of what we are, alone, and sigh
    Last edited by deaths_raver667; Jun 02, 2005 at 08:44 AM.
    i am the urban monky
    look to the mune

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