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    [Poem]To the Moon

    --To the Moon--

    A trail that once led the way,
    swallowed completely;
    it's difficult to move
    when no moon casts
    its whispered shadows.
    A light, not yet tread upon
    of his own self indulgent;
    a mask of faltered lies
    stains his parched cheeks.
    It fades away so quickly,
    an illusion; mirage not seen
    where a secret's burning wishes;
    a plea's gulty cry,
    are lost within confines of remorse.
    So he sang to the moon
    the only words he knew,
    singing lilting truths; remembering
    iniquities of archaic realms.

    The mask begins to crumble;
    the trail peeks its way through;
    blown away, the lies
    where soft rays of light shine down.
    And that of which he took;
    a brand new beginning, he receives,
    from the air he lives and breathes,
    easing his way from the past.

    Nothing's left, but memories.

    ---

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    "When the time is right, you'll learn to love me."

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    Beautiful, reminds me of lyrics that might be found on a Porcupine Tree album or something, very well done.

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    very nice poem u should make more
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    that is a really nice poem. i hope u write more ^_^

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    nice good work i like it

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    nice poem,

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    Very impressive. Anyway the last line "Nothings left but memories" got me though. I like it.

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