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    [Poem] My Own Personal Heaven

    The bliss that is satisfaction from everything you do,
    the ecstacy of the moment from the second it all started,
    the sheer rush I get everytime that we meet.

    The feelings that go by just as fast as the time we share,
    both traveling faster than the essence of pure light itself,
    the place that exists where ever, whenever beyond the limits of time and space,
    that special place we travel to, my own personal heaven.

    The place that seems like home, where ever we might be,
    the time that is everlasting that will never come back to bother,
    the only place we ever are when we are together, my own personal heaven.

    The place i love to go to,
    the place i love to see,
    the place i love as much as you and i,
    My Very Own, Personal Heaven...
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    i really like this one a lot... per usual of your poems...to me, it seems to have that wonderful, blissful feeling, but there might be some unknown, hidden secrets of sorrow hidden by a new found happiness.... something along these lines is what i get from this poem and i really like it a lot... good job.... MORE !!! i want more!!! lol

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    very nice! keep it up!
    people's poems just get better and better here
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