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Thread: [poem} protection (i just thought it up)

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    [poem} protection (i just thought it up)

    you know i will not stop,
    i'll protect you until i drop.
    lookin at the time,
    its going by,
    you know i will not stop.
    i'll give you my protection,
    let me make a corection,
    i'll give you my life,
    i will protect you until my legs collapse,
    until my angel wings wont flap.

    what you all think about it? or :Thumbd:
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    Hey,i saw ur message look at my journal when u have a chance,oh,by the way wats ur a/s/l

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    Makes me think of the relationship between Squall and Rinoa. Nicely written.
    Last edited by Kikinaki; May 01, 2005 at 05:19 PM.

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    That's a good poem

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    nice nice work )

    put your mind on paper and show us more.

    -simple

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    Actually, it makes me think of a relationship between the Sohmas and Tohru (Fruits Basket). Anyway, it was a good poem. Light hearted and cute. But u had one spelling error: "Correction" not "Corection" :]

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    its good to protect than not to protect that why being a good guy is good
    nice work good job

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