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    (poem) Realize

    If you Realize
    That in your fear lies
    A key to the skies
    A way to swat the flies
    A chance to **** the brides
    A means to skin their hides
    You care not to hear their cries
    As you look on to the skies
    You begin to Realize
    That this day has changed you forever
    And all their heads you wish to sever
    Your glad you decided to go on this endever
    Your glad to see your so clever
    Maybe you should keep one for yourself
    And put it on your hidden shelf
    In your hidden room
    To remember how you spelled her doom
    Because you'll forget soon
    Probably by the next moon
    Then you Realize
    That you despise
    That ****ing sunrise
    That you've committed seven homicides
    You know now what you should do
    The next one to die is you
    So say goodbye to the Brides

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    There's no holding you when it comes to writing poems. You really pulled of a good job and i think many will agree with that. Well done

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    Greetings,

    Awsome work their my fellow Ghostwriter,
    i really enjoy reading it. good job keep yourself alive for your writings will make you live forever

    -simple

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    wow i really liked it it kept to the piont and a good flow while rhyming too!! great job on this 1!!
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    great work nice job

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    Hmmmm.... i havent seen like this one before, good work.

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