Thread: {poem} Take all but the shell

this is Jess and i would like it if you rated my poem ^ on a scale from one to ten if you would be so kind. Also, if i may ask, a few suggestions in how to make this one and others better. Your opinions, please. Thanks. It's much appreciated (sp).
-Jess(not usually this polite unless asking for a favor- hence the attitude)

*comes out of the shadows*
Nice I like it. I could see this is one of those poems that you can mold to multiple thing in life. like when you said "Go now leave Take my heart take your seed" you could relate that to a broken heart, or simply someone who had a baby and is tellin the other person to get the h**l outa their and take the kid with you!lol
GOOD STUFF JESS!! 10/10
ps thanks 4 the post!
*seeps into the shadows*

Very nice. 10/10. Such emotion in the poems can tear at a person's soul. My poems are light hearted too often, so I rarely post something like this. I need to apply more emotion in mine. Keep up the good work.