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    [Poem] A trio of poems

    Involved

    It only hurts their head
    My fate and memories a burden
    While I take the suffering to bed
    Maybe I do more harm than I could ever solve
    Entangled with your life
    Forcing you to step on the shards
    No one causes happiness
    Without the risk of pain
    The immense feeling of helplessness
    While standing in the rain.
    My friendship is a poison
    That’s sweet until the end
    Not without those moments
    That makes us comprehend

    Selfish

    The cause of all.
    The scream. A scream
    The kiss. A kiss
    The reason. A reason
    The pen. A pen
    The end. An End


    Confusion

    Break my mind with your tongue
    I sit and listen
    And lightly hum
    Your tricks are for me
    Your words are lies
    Speaking them to me
    Looking in my eyes
    I break my silence
    And start to run
    I see you with him
    Looking for fun
    So the truth comes out
    I see those lies
    What ever is best for you.
    I’ll simply hide.

    ~~~~~~
    Involved selfish confusion. Written at work. (C) March 2005 Jake Barager
    ~~~~~~

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    Nice. I like all 3 ov em.....nicely written.... Involved probably being my favorite. Good stuff

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    Thanks narr. I really enjoy feedback.

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    Nice poems. I like them.

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