Hey, yeah, like it a lot, yet the use of ...bite at skin... and ...bite me... is a little repetative(sp). A synomym for bite might help. Sorry, pet-peve of mine to try not to use the same verb and/or adj. in a poem or paragraph. But of course otherwise everything's fine. I really like it as i said before. Keep it up.
-Jess or Jessica(whatever) :thumb:
Hey, Summoned 1, check out my poems too and give me feed back would'ja? Please? thanks.:D