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    The Rain

    I stand alone in the rain
    feeling the droplets hit my face.
    I can't tell if I am crying anymore,
    I can feel the embrace of my love.

    I am the one who is suppose to
    protect her, yet she is my sheath.
    My life has been like a drawn sword
    and she came along and sheath it.

    She became my protector and healer,
    I loved her with my heart and supported her.
    I could not protect her from the horrors
    that this world had shown me.
    Yet we never left each other and protected
    each other. Healed each other.
    Even loved each other.

    I asked her to marry me and she agreed.
    I thought I could protect her forever,
    yet Death threw it's joker and she died.
    I couldn't protect her and in my arms
    she said, "My life was empty till I met you,
    I was so happy to have loved you. I'll always
    be you, my love". It was raining then.

    At her grave, I laid flowers and spoke to her.
    I wore her wedding ring around my neck.
    The pain became dull and I remembered.
    We had protected, healed and loved.
    I spoke, "I always love you and never
    forget what you did for me."
    It began to raining again as I stood there.

    I dunno if the title is the right one for this, so sorry if the title isnt the right one.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: The Rain

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    I stand alone in the rain
    feeling the droplets hit my face.
    I can't tell if I am crying anymore,
    I can feel the embrace of my love.

    I am the one who is suppose to
    protect her, yet she is my sheath.
    My life has been like a drawn sword
    and she came along and sheath it.

    She became my protector and healer,
    I loved her with my heart and supported her.
    I could not protect her from the horrors
    that this world had shown me.
    Yet we never left each other and protected
    each other. Healed each other.
    Even loved each other.

    I asked her to marry me and she agreed.
    I thought I could protect her forever,
    yet Death threw it's joker and she died.
    I couldn't protect her and in my arms
    she said, "My life was empty till I met you,
    I was so happy to have loved you. I'll always
    be you, my love". It was raining then.

    At her grave, I laid flowers and spoke to her.
    I wore her wedding ring around my neck.
    The pain became dull and I remembered.
    We had protected, healed and loved.
    I spoke, "I always love you and never
    forget what you did for me."
    It began to raining again as I stood there.

    I dunno if the title is the right one for this, so sorry if the title isnt the right one.

    The title is perfect, and yeah that is awesome I would like to see more.

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    Re: The Rain

    right title dude. seems alittle dark but thats my opinion. ya great dude. i give u a 10 out of 10

    IM BACK

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    Re: The Rain

    Why do you guy tend to make thee cry *tears* I just wish once this well be a hapy poem. But this ones was great. I even had a picture in my head.
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    Re: The Rain

    o.O i like ur work....nc job...reminds me of STUFF...lol

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    Re: The Rain

    Its always raining.....
    Like without ending
    Like also my pain now
    That doesn't stop

    But after all of my pain
    And all of my hope
    To forgot you
    That's just I can't do.....

    That is just some of the lyrics I just translate to you entitled Rain too in this country, maybe some of people in this country knows that......

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    Re: The Rain

    I don't like sad poems, which is a shame, because it seems that's all people ever write about these days.

    Having said that, I would like to make a request!

    I request of someone, anyone, a short poem about a man in a pastry shop making tasty pastries. Tasty pastries. If it's a rhyming poem, then you've already got your first rhyme.

    Keep eating so many dogs and you're bound to be Communist

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