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moving to anime/manga
wow! thats good ^__^ I like it!
You should work on with the story, it sounds good. :D
Not bad I like it ^___^
sounds good to me! :2thumbs:
the idea is really good but its not my type maybe there will be alots of fan for your story
the idea is very original although i reckon u need to work on the name of your characters.other than that i like it. i give it a 8 out of 10.keep working at it
yeah storyline seems very good, put some twists in it and i guess it could be great. but i'm not really into that kind on genre so i guess i don't realy have a say in the matter, but it is fairly original which has to count for something.