I think that your story has a lot of potential. Don't know if you could make it a series, maybe a movie. Still a good idea so keep working on it.
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That's A Cool Idea!!!
sounds like a good idea too me
....Player Killer....??* "There is nothing to fear but F.E.A.R. it self -(F.E.A.R) " ??*
perhaps could you change the name shingo not that its bad it just tends to remind me of the song bingo "there was a farmer had a dog and bingo was his name-o b-i-n-g-o , b-i-n-g-o, b-i-n-g-o and bingo was his name-o" other than that the story sound unique and interesting i would watch it for sure
sounds like something coolios to me i suppose ;D
even though it seems like a short series, crap, its so freaking good!! this summary already ties me into it!! *6 thumbs up*