We have a new talent guyss.
Nice job, well done.
I look into Your eyes
And I see everything I ever wanted to be
What a perfect suprise
That you were never far from me
And I wanted you to know
That I'm reaching for your hand
But I always seem to fall
Right before you reach for me
And I never knew
How hard it could be
To fall from your sight
Even though I try
To get back up
And I wonder
How can I be here
When everything I ever wanted is there with you
I long to be near
That perfect love that you have offered me
But I've fallen from grace
And I don't know how to pick myself back up
Then you offer your hand to mine
How can you say
That everything will be alright
How can you tell me
That I'm gonna be with you forever
And I know that I will never feel
The same as I fell when I'm with you
But I'll never feel again
The pain of losing you
The sarrow of falling away from the one thing I want most of all
And you can never tell me that I am gonna be all right
I've fallen from a tower of refuge and I can see the monsters holding me down
Dimly now I see you
Staring down at me
In wonder I look up and see you there
And you beckon me near
And now I wonder
How can I be here
When everything I ever wanted is there with you
I long to be near
That perfect love that you have offered me
But I've fallen from grace
And I don't know how to pick myself back up
Then you offer your hand to mine
And I see it there
And I fight the demans I hold inside
Closer I come
Further I fall
And your reaching further
And I'm fighting harder
And I see your face
The warm mbrace of your eyes
And I keep on wondering
How can I be here
When everything I ever wanted is there with you
I long to be near
That perfect love that you have offered me
But I've fallen from grace
And I don't know how to pick myself back up
Then you offer your hand to mine
And I take your hand in mine
And you pull me up, to walk with you
And now I wonder
How could I be there
When everything I ever wanted was here with you
And now I'm near
That perfect love that you have offered me
And I fell from grace
And I didn't know how to pick myself back up
Then you offered your hand to mine
So I took your hand in mine
This is a little song I wrote. So if you read it tell me what you think of it
LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE
always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy
A'Karuya (the young warrior)
We have a new talent guyss.
Nice job, well done.
Impressive. Your writing skill is very polished and shows alot of talent. Hope to see more from you. Nice job
song came from the heart and poem at the same-time good job
nice
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This is just so awsome.. really. I mean yeah the writing is beautiful. Nice job.
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