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    Reaching For Your Hand

    I look into Your eyes
    And I see everything I ever wanted to be
    What a perfect suprise
    That you were never far from me
    And I wanted you to know
    That I'm reaching for your hand
    But I always seem to fall
    Right before you reach for me

    And I never knew
    How hard it could be
    To fall from your sight
    Even though I try
    To get back up
    And I wonder
    How can I be here
    When everything I ever wanted is there with you
    I long to be near
    That perfect love that you have offered me
    But I've fallen from grace
    And I don't know how to pick myself back up
    Then you offer your hand to mine

    How can you say
    That everything will be alright
    How can you tell me
    That I'm gonna be with you forever
    And I know that I will never feel
    The same as I fell when I'm with you
    But I'll never feel again
    The pain of losing you
    The sarrow of falling away from the one thing I want most of all
    And you can never tell me that I am gonna be all right
    I've fallen from a tower of refuge and I can see the monsters holding me down

    Dimly now I see you
    Staring down at me
    In wonder I look up and see you there
    And you beckon me near
    And now I wonder
    How can I be here
    When everything I ever wanted is there with you
    I long to be near
    That perfect love that you have offered me
    But I've fallen from grace
    And I don't know how to pick myself back up
    Then you offer your hand to mine

    And I see it there
    And I fight the demans I hold inside
    Closer I come
    Further I fall
    And your reaching further
    And I'm fighting harder
    And I see your face
    The warm mbrace of your eyes
    And I keep on wondering
    How can I be here
    When everything I ever wanted is there with you
    I long to be near
    That perfect love that you have offered me
    But I've fallen from grace
    And I don't know how to pick myself back up
    Then you offer your hand to mine
    And I take your hand in mine
    And you pull me up, to walk with you
    And now I wonder
    How could I be there
    When everything I ever wanted was here with you
    And now I'm near
    That perfect love that you have offered me
    And I fell from grace
    And I didn't know how to pick myself back up
    Then you offered your hand to mine
    So I took your hand in mine

    This is a little song I wrote. So if you read it tell me what you think of it
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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    We have a new talent guyss .
    Nice job, well done.

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    Impressive. Your writing skill is very polished and shows alot of talent. Hope to see more from you. Nice job

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    song came from the heart and poem at the same-time good job nice

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    This is just so awsome.. really. I mean yeah the writing is beautiful. Nice job.

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