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    Reflections (Poem)

    I look into myself,
    and see what i thought i'd never see.
    I see love... but there is something else...
    something hidden beneath it.
    I see years of pain,
    and daily struggles there.
    somehow though...
    the pain of the past slowly is fading.
    however, i see the daily pains grow,
    even bigger than days before,
    lashing at what I have now.
    the love i have for others keeps it back,
    but the containment of it might not last,
    as long as i wish it to,
    for the people I care about "here".
    the one's i care about "here"...
    they doubt me.
    they doubt my ways and motives.
    they don't know me anymore.
    my life is mine to decide.
    I peer deeper into myself,
    and see what I wanted to see.
    "you" know what I see.
    I don't see myself "here" anymore,
    I see it in another place.
    the pain i have cannot follow me to this place...
    and this place is where I'll stay till I die.
    such is my reflection...
    leaving is my fate....
    and such is the reflection.


    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    "Sadness portrays hurt, Love portrays happiness.... all else portrays nothing."

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    I appluad your cryptic lines. My favorite part was:

    I don't see myself "here" anymore,
    I see it in another place.
    the pain i have cannot follow me to this place...
    and this place is where I'll stay till I die.


    I can relate to that in particular. I personaly think that the majority of people could relate to the poem. I wonder if this poem was written from your heart not creativity, this poem shows raw emotions of everyday people.

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    Words.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lady Symphony
    I appluad your cryptic lines. My favorite part was:

    I don't see myself "here" anymore,
    I see it in another place.
    the pain i have cannot follow me to this place...
    and this place is where I'll stay till I die.


    I can relate to that in particular. I personaly think that the majority of people could relate to the poem. I wonder if this poem was written from your heart not creativity, this poem shows raw emotions of everyday people.
    The thing you have to realize with me, is that I normally don't write without emotion. That's what makes my works unique is that most of them is heart felt, like this one. My heart feels, and I write that. You have to understand that I have a big heart. I guess that's why I can portray this emotion.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    i really love you justin
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    Of course and people who write with emotion are the best, and i can truly relate to that...once again lovely job.

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    kool poem and good work

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