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    Otaku Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79 may be famous one day Kiri79's Avatar
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    Rumors

    I know what you've been saying
    I know about all of the lies
    I pretend as if I don't care
    But it's tearing me up inside

    The old saying isn't true
    Here's the new instead of the old:
    Sticks and stones may break your bones
    But words can shatter a soul

    I try to play along in your little game
    Laughing as you go along
    But inside I want to cry:
    "Don't they know this is wrong?"

    I try to play it tough
    Stick it out until the end
    But everyone is attacking
    In reality I don't have a single friend

    These rumors are out of control
    In the end I know I'll be scarred
    But I have to be the suvivor
    Even though it seems really hard.

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    sad but true good job

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    I always give plus points for rhyming. This is good ! :]

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    As facts our stated in your poem, i truly like it. Well done indeed Kiri

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kikinaki
    As facts our stated in your poem, i truly like it. Well done indeed Kiri
    Yeah, kikinaki knows alot of rumors , nice poem.

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    nice job, i tihnk you nailed the feelings of rumors rather well

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    Good one.l great willpower. And I liked the "sticks and stones may break your bones; but words can shatter a soul" Its very, very true.

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