Touching ... awesome Elie ^_^ You're talented!
Upon my shoulder
I carry a weight
That haunts me everyday in my dream
I struggle to break free from it
But every time I do it seems
That it clings harder on to me
Little by little it consumes part of my soul
Till I’m left with what’s left of it
I feel tired, weak and cold
Oh god, help me!
I have a hole
A hole that’s needs to be replaced
Or suffer from what I’m most afraid
Loneliness
Depression
I know you well
You feed on me when I’m all alone
Then suddenly a bright light appeared
Like an angel from the clouds
I looked up expectantly
Hoping it’s a blessing from up above
The light brightens, the person is revealed
Who might that person be?
Dressed in normal average clothes
Staring at me with her soft blue eyes
Making me feel so alive
She smiled at me and flowers bloomed
Tress grew and birds singed
I felt warm again and oh so free
Free from whatever that’s haunting me
I could dance and jump and hop around
I could spread my invisible wings and fly away
I suddenly realized that life can be
Filled with such happiness, joy and cheer
Thank you my savior
Thank you for rescuing me
I’ve never appreciated life
I never did
You showed me a way
You taught me how
You shall forever be in my heart
A special person I shall cherish for now and all eternity
Touching ... awesome Elie ^_^ You're talented!
I see from your eyes
How much you desire
How much you care
Oh daring light
I give my life to this splendid one.....
Why can't you be my soul and heart.....
Very nice..... I'm impressed.....
Glad you be a good poet.....
lol....u can also write! cool...........Originally Posted by SousukeSagara
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lol your poem is really kool, i have been reading many poems, but so far i haven't read a poem as good as yours, keep up the good work.
Touching...... i wish i had a angel who can show me the way.. but good job on your peom
Oh that was great. You now just how to write it. How do you think of this stuff.
Nice elie, very touching. Can I ask wut was ur inspiration for this poem?
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
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