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    Say or No (Poem)

    Do I say,
    or do I stray,
    from saying,
    what I don't or do want to say.

    Do I tell,
    or refrain,
    from telling her,
    what's under my mane.

    Thinking of her,
    but not in the way...
    she may realize it,
    if she reads this today.

    I like her,
    or should I stall,
    cause I just may,
    be crushed again and fall.

    I guess a secret,
    no more i will remain,
    because of this poem,
    she, letting me stay sane....


    By Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    I was trying something on this one... so forgive me if it sux...

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    And you've done it well to say the least! Terrific poem you wrote there, well done

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    Very memorable poem, deeply written and nicely accomplished. Great job!

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    I agree! Terrific peom! (once again)

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    I love rhyming poems. Kudos! :]

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    justin that is a good poem and i k now what it means also
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    like all others ahve said; beautiful!
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    I like those short sentences, nice poem.

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