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    Otaku MuMu Champion Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart may be famous one day Shade/K' Heart's Avatar
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    Shrouded

    I can’t even see,
    Anyone else.
    It’s as if no other girl exists.
    I stand here and see,
    20 girls walk by.
    Every one of them,
    Reminds me of you.
    Why you ask?
    I can’t always say.
    The one with the red hair…
    My girl’s hair is brighter.
    The one with the blue eyes…
    My girl’s eyes are more heavenly.
    The pretty girls…
    My girl is just as pretty,
    But is sweet to me too.
    She may not admit that she’s pretty,
    Or she may say she’s a little pretty,
    But who said I was always talking,
    About her physical beauty.
    Sure… my girl’s got a hot bod…
    But that’s just a bonus with this package.
    She’s got a heart of pure gold,
    And she shares it with me daily.
    I love my Little Rose Petal.
    I gave her that name,
    And she’s kept it for herself,
    To this very day.
    Her images shroud me daily,
    And her heart shrouds me with her love.
    I can’t get enough of her.
    Thinking of her,
    Is the easiest thing to do.
    Seeing her face is,
    Just a blink away.
    I love Amandra,
    With all that I have.
    And may I make her life special,
    And make her life a joy daily.

    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    i love you forever thanks luis
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    You's Trollin Pro Leafblower Champion, Helicopter Champion ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro is making a name for themselves ketaro's Avatar
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    kool poem dude!!!

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    Sure… my girl’s got a hot bod…
    But that’s just a bonus with this package.

    LOL tha's so funny Oh god, any way, I think thios couple will be the last I work 4, I'll always help, but I have to find my love, and she is 45 minutes away frm me, so I'm lucky so far. Justin & Amandra, I'll always help, but this is the last couple, that'll be under my wing. ^-^

    I'm thinkin about her right now, u know tha's wat I'll write to my journal
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    Yeh, there's freeverse. This transcends freeverse, moves beyond street poetry, and into the realms of clever indentation.
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