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    Sleep tight

    Please dont cry little child
    every thing will be alright
    mommy will dry your tears
    mommy will kiss you goodnight
    i may not have strong hands
    i may not look tough at sight
    but i can sing you to sleep
    and tuck you in tight
    Ill try to be your mother
    and a good father too
    Ill be the very best
    just for you
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    Nice

    Very short and sweet. To the point, and beautiful. That shows a mother's love right there, no need for any more words. Nice work.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    I like your word usage and style. It really tells me what to feel about it.

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