Soldier's Decree

Squall · Feb 16, 2005, 10:32 AM

I fight for my loved ones, my ideals
for anything else would be a scam
I go on till my dreams become real
for that, i fight with everything that i am

an opinon would be nice

*narrator* · Feb 17, 2005, 04:32 PM

touching poem....maybe couldve been stretched out a tad, but good anyways.

Niledhel · Feb 17, 2005, 04:49 PM

I like it, it's good

Squall · Feb 18, 2005, 02:20 PM

i know it is short and maybe later i'll write a longer form of this, but some comments good or bad would be nice

Feb 16, 2005, 10:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
Squall Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Soldier's Decree (poem, opinon would be nice) I fight for my loved ones, my ideals for anything else would be a scam I go on till my dreams become real for that, i fight with everything that i am an opinon would be nice __________________ Last edited by Squall; Feb 17, 2005 at 10:18 AM.
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Feb 17, 2005, 04:32 PM	#2 (permalink)
narrator Self Banned and Loving it Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Check the cellar.... Posts: 1,990 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 251	touching poem....maybe couldve been stretched out a tad, but good anyways. __________________
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Feb 17, 2005, 04:49 PM	#3 (permalink)
Niledhel Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Manchester, UK Posts: 63 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	I like it, it's good __________________ Sig kindly made by Hikari Sakurai
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Feb 18, 2005, 02:20 PM	#4 (permalink)
Squall Newbie Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	i know it is short and maybe later i'll write a longer form of this, but some comments good or bad would be nice __________________
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