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    Strainath's Death March

    As I walk with my sword drawn
    I notice that is the break of dawn
    As I sing this beautiful little song
    I think of all that has gone wrong
    That all my freinds have been killed
    All so pitiful little Zeladar can be thrilled
    His sins have gone unattoned for to long
    And I can no longer go along
    With this dark plot that sickens me
    Now I shall make him plea
    For death because of what he did to my beloved Aslee
    And soon enough I may see
    What demise is left for me

    Long have I been told I am the chosen one
    But how can this be true after all the evil I have done
    After all the lives I've taken
    Why have I not been forsaken

    Thats a little something from the end of my story. I was going over it today and figured someone would like this.
    This pain is sratching at my bone.
    And this Loneliness won't leave me alone.

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    Well, nice riming you've got there, i like it.

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    rhymey goodness good poem
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    i love this peom it has so much confusion and anger in it.... well i don't love it cause of ur confusion and anger, just cause there is emotion in it lol u know what i mean??? anyways, bottom line: i like it

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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