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    Tears

    Another tear....
    it slowly rolls to my cheek,
    and goes my sides,
    then to my lips.
    my lips that have pained,
    and will forever.
    why...
    why did this have to be...
    me.. for whom is a kind man,
    lonesome on such a night,
    like tonight....
    why am i always alone...
    always pained like this...
    i lay and another tear,
    wishes to join it's mate,
    and does so on my lips.
    "why do my tears,
    come in pairs...
    when my heart,
    always tears."
    i cry as i lay....
    "poeticly i die,
    and dramaticly i cry...
    soaking my pillow here,
    with yet another tear..."
    why must i now recite,
    as no one cares or knows,
    that i write.
    i just wanted one more kiss,
    from someone who actually cares....
    is that too much to ask?
    so i lay,
    and remember,
    the kiss that broke me,
    and stole my soul,
    and my love.
    and so i'm still alone,
    as i curl up,
    pillow at my knees and arms...
    ...
    ...
    forgive me...


    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Absolutely moving, i really feel the emotion put into this one. Great work

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    Sigh. This is so sad. Don't worry, everything will be fine. I know how you feel. Yea, now I can see our similarities. Don't worry, everything will be fine soon yeah. Don't give up! :] This poem expresses so much emotion so painfully that I can hear my heart breaking already. :'(

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    I know how you feel, you feel alone, nice job.

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    so dramatic,,, you feel alone?!!!
    nice one

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    Nice job! The emotion in this poem is so strong... so I love It!

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    Man sad but true good this is to good, good work dude keep up the good work

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    that was very touching
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