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    Thorn (poem)

    everyone must think,
    i'm a thorn on a rose bush.
    i'm not the one they care about,
    for i'm not the beautiful thing.
    i'm the one that causes pain,
    the thing they want to prune away.
    well a rose without thorns,
    is unprotected.
    so i wish to guard your heart,
    like a thorn on a rose bush.

    By Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    how very touching... very deep... Expression of ones
    heart is a beautiful thing. if thats what you are confessing.
    A good poem if rated i would give it a 8 outta 10.
    Looking forward to Burst Angel Vol. 3

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    I like it, it's short and powerfull!!

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    The first few lines remind me of my aunts rose bushes that look like a wilting flower but are sopposed to be that way and my aunt thinks they're beautiful. point is that everything is beautiful in someones eyes and in my eyes you are very beautiful^^
    A deathless heart alive with greif
    Smiles when it hears of thee
    Whisper now my secret love
    Kiss my lips and rise above

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    Very nice, K' Heart. Not only does it show deep emotion, it also makes a very good point.

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    very good, a lil short though but still great

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    it put all of a book into few lines loves the way something so short caouls have power than can make my heart skip a beat
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