Thoughts

*dark frog* · May 18, 2005, 06:54 PM

i am here thinking,
what should i do,
but be hurt by you,
you had me nineteen years ago,
but you left me when i was six,
and left me with him,
what did i do so wrong,
that you had to leave me,
when i needed you the most,
you were not there,
now when i don't need you,
you want to be in my life,
now that we start to get close,
i hide my feelings,
i never been loved before,
so now i am scared,
that you love me so,
i have no clue,
how that can be,
why do i have these thoughts,
why can't they go away,
why do i feel this way,
where did i find you,
God help me now,
YOU helped me find him,
when i needed him the most,
where were you when i was sixteen,
where are you now,
besides in my heart,
why do i have these thoughts,
please tell me this!

*narrator* · May 18, 2005, 06:57 PM

very nice, Good job. These always seem to get better

*dark frog* · May 18, 2005, 07:21 PM

thanks i am really trying hard but all my poems show my feelings and it hurts and some of them like this one is of my child hood.

simple · May 19, 2005, 01:09 AM

i really like your work,
its good to see that you were really able to express what you felt thru these words.

well i was able to capture what you went thru,
remember this is the key that drives us,
we are still dreaming.

-simple

RavenMoon13 · May 19, 2005, 05:07 AM

i like this poem a lot your work is getting better with each one

!Kikinaki · May 19, 2005, 09:06 AM

Sad one indeed. You're getting better with each poem Dark Frog, keep it going!

A'Karuya · May 19, 2005, 09:14 AM

very good it seems that justin is rubbing off on you

Shade/K' Heart · May 19, 2005, 09:28 AM

I'm just glad that my girl is finding a passion in the poetry. She's a natural. Keep it up Rose Petal!!

*dark frog* · May 19, 2005, 01:42 PM

well really i am not a natural but thanks for the comment. I LOVE YOU JUSTIN

animenet · May 19, 2005, 02:52 PM

sweet dude!!!

animenet · May 19, 2005, 02:53 PM

it is very touching...

May 18, 2005, 06:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
dark frog AO Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amboy,Illinois Posts: 100 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Thoughts i am here thinking, what should i do, but be hurt by you, you had me nineteen years ago, but you left me when i was six, and left me with him, what did i do so wrong, that you had to leave me, when i needed you the most, you were not there, now when i don't need you, you want to be in my life, now that we start to get close, i hide my feelings, i never been loved before, so now i am scared, that you love me so, i have no clue, how that can be, why do i have these thoughts, why can't they go away, why do i feel this way, where did i find you, God help me now, YOU helped me find him, when i needed him the most, where were you when i was sixteen, where are you now, besides in my heart, why do i have these thoughts, please tell me this! __________________ LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.
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May 18, 2005, 06:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
narrator Self Banned and Loving it Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Check the cellar.... Posts: 1,990 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 151	very nice, Good job. These always seem to get better __________________
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May 18, 2005, 07:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
dark frog AO Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amboy,Illinois Posts: 100 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	thanks i am really trying hard but all my poems show my feelings and it hurts and some of them like this one is of my child hood. __________________ LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.
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simple Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	i really like your work, its good to see that you were really able to express what you felt thru these words. well i was able to capture what you went thru, remember this is the key that drives us, we are still dreaming. -simple
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RavenMoon13 Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: fl Posts: 48 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	i like this poem a lot your work is getting better with each one __________________ "Dim vales- and shadowy floods- And cloudy-looking woods, Whose forms we can't discover For the tears that drip all over! Huge moons there wax and wane- Again- again- again-" Edgar Allan Poe
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!Kikinaki Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 246 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: -200	Sad one indeed. You're getting better with each poem Dark Frog, keep it going!
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A'Karuya Newbie Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: here Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	very good it seems that justin is rubbing off on you __________________ LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy A'Karuya (the young warrior)
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Shade/K' Heart Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: I am always near... Posts: 409 Thanks: 10 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Credits: 2,889	I'm just glad that my girl is finding a passion in the poetry. She's a natural. Keep it up Rose Petal!! __________________ Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
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May 19, 2005, 01:42 PM	#9 (permalink)
dark frog AO Member Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Amboy,Illinois Posts: 100 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	well really i am not a natural but thanks for the comment. I LOVE YOU JUSTIN __________________ LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.
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animenet Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 83 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	sweet dude!!!
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animenet Newbie Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 83 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	it is very touching...
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