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    i am here thinking,
    what should i do,
    but be hurt by you,
    you had me nineteen years ago,
    but you left me when i was six,
    and left me with him,
    what did i do so wrong,
    that you had to leave me,
    when i needed you the most,
    you were not there,
    now when i don't need you,
    you want to be in my life,
    now that we start to get close,
    i hide my feelings,
    i never been loved before,
    so now i am scared,
    that you love me so,
    i have no clue,
    how that can be,
    why do i have these thoughts,
    why can't they go away,
    why do i feel this way,
    where did i find you,
    God help me now,
    YOU helped me find him,
    when i needed him the most,
    where were you when i was sixteen,
    where are you now,
    besides in my heart,
    why do i have these thoughts,
    please tell me this!
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    very nice, Good job. These always seem to get better

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    thanks i am really trying hard but all my poems show my feelings and it hurts and some of them like this one is of my child hood.
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    i really like your work,
    its good to see that you were really able to express what you felt thru these words.

    well i was able to capture what you went thru,
    remember this is the key that drives us,
    we are still dreaming.

    -simple

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    i like this poem a lot your work is getting better with each one

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    Sad one indeed. You're getting better with each poem Dark Frog, keep it going!

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    very good it seems that justin is rubbing off on you
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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    I'm just glad that my girl is finding a passion in the poetry. She's a natural. Keep it up Rose Petal!!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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