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    A Thousand Miles

    All right, this is a poem I wrote a year ago. I hope everyone likes it!

    What is this thing called life
    Sometimes I feel so happy and then it cuts me like a knife
    But for some reason I just keep going on

    It seems like I've walked a thousand miles and I still have a long way to go
    There have been times in my life
    When I held my head down low
    Then I finally found the person in me
    Now I hold my head up high
    And I still keep going on

    Sometimes I look at myself in the mirror
    And think of all the things I could have done
    Then I look ahead on this road called life
    And then I see
    I need to keep on going on whats in front of me

    It seems like I've walked a thousand miles and I still have a long way to go
    There have been times in my life
    When I held my head down low
    Then I finally found the person in me
    Now I hold my head up high
    And I still keep going on

    I look at the sadness and all the anger in the world
    Wondering if it will ever end and get captured in my own misery
    Then I look up and look around
    See what all I have
    Then I realize that it's not that bad
    And that a brighter day will come


    I actually wrote this as a song but songs can be considered poems right? This poem represents that no matter how bad life may seem or miserable it may make you feel there will always be a brighter day. You just have to look for it.

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    Alright! Awesome I'm hungry for more ^_^ Keep it up

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    Nice. i like. Share some more. Don't hold it all to yourself. I likes
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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    There are many talented people in this community huh.....

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    cool...............................................

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    wow awesome poem, lol ilike the rhyme sounding, it seems that you are at it, keep up the good work.

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    Great work!!! I truly loved your poem or song, whatever it may be called. It has a good meaning regarding life in general, so I like it because I am always curious of life, too. Yes, brighter and auroral days are always up ahead, and as The Divine God keeps shining of us with the glorifying radiance, all days are bright! ^^

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    Re: A Thousand Miles

    nice poem i like it alot sounds good^^


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