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    Lost but Never Found.....

    Time does not bring relef; you all have lied. Who told me time would ease my pain! I miss him in the weeping of the rain; I want him at the shrinking of the tide; The old snows melt from every mountain-side, And last year's leaves are smoke in every lane; But last year's bitter loving must remain Heaped on my heart, and my old thoughts abide. There are a hundred places where I fear. To go - so with his they brim. And entering with relief some quiet place. Where never fell his foot or shone his face. I say ' There is no of him of him here !' And so stand stricken, so remembering him.
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    This is a poem right, if this is a poem then i think its great.

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    i really like this poem a lot .... it sounds like a poem so i think it is one... lol i would suggest getting some line pattern instead of a paragraph form to make it look more like one.... but yah my horse had to be put down a little while back, and even though i am pretty sure this poem is about a man, i can really relate to the meaning of it and it has a lot of emotion in it... love it... also, since it just says "he" when describing what you miss, instead of a certain person, it makes it even easier for people to relate.... really good job. keep it up and write more for us!!!!

    "Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
    And cloudy-looking woods,
    Whose forms we can't discover
    For the tears that drip all over!
    Huge moons there wax and wane-
    Again- again- again-"



    Edgar Allan Poe

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    Dude, you got it, im lovin the poem, it rocks, keep up the good work! and btw i really lke your avatar and sig, is it supposed to be Kykio from Inuyasha? cause it looks it i think...

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