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    Times Never Forgotten

    Holding my lover...
    For the last time.

    The air we breathe...
    Exhaled from his mouth.

    Each heart beat...
    A tad slower than the last.

    A flutter of his eyes...
    Sparkling with pain.

    Each tear that descends...
    Filled with misery.

    Holding my lover...
    For the last time.

    One final breath...
    And the beating stops.

    The eyes forever...
    Closed to darkness.

    The tears...
    Finally stop.

    Holding my lover...
    For the last time.

    I embrace the memories.
    Last edited by Kasai; Jan 04, 2005 at 12:31 PM.
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    that was so sweet!!
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    Wow... Not your typical memory poem ya know? Nice job for steppin out of the box. I liked it alot!

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    "The oxygen we breathe...
    Exhaled from his mouth."

    ..that's carbon dioxide... just being picky
    It' was very nice, yet sad... y does the guy always die T-T *saddend and hiding in coner*... T-T
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    Better Jadey? ^-^
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    ahh much, the poem flows much better =)
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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