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    The Tooth Breaker

    I sit at my computer typing my poem,
    A mentioning my love in it.
    I sit with nothing but my shorts,
    Letting the bare skin breathe,
    After a long morning’s slumber.
    I get to the end and finish it,
    When my stomach rumbles.
    “I better find some food…”,
    I say as I rise from my chair.
    The kitty cats are asleep,
    And I pet the one that’s awake.
    I go into the freezer and I see the candy bar,
    That I put in there to keep it from melting.
    “Hm… forgot about this”,
    I say as I pick it up and,
    Proceed to my room.
    I sit down and open the wrapper.
    I go to take a bite and turn it,
    It doesn’t pull away,
    In the ooey gooey caramel ooze,
    That I love to eat….
    Nope… it snaps right off,
    Being as it’s more solid now,
    Sitting overnight in the cold.
    “Damn, that sucker‘s hard as a rock!”
    Chewing is a small problem,
    So I take small chunks at a time.
    I bite too much,
    And I’ll lose a molar.
    I can’t use the front teeth,
    As they are not big enough for the job.
    I bite with the back teeth,
    To tear away the mummy chocolate,
    Peanut and caramel from it’s base.
    Fifth bite now,
    And it’s still hard as steel.
    I bite again,
    But can’t pull away this time.
    I make a second effort,
    With teeth marks in the bar,
    And am successful the second try.
    “That thing is STILL FROZE!!!”
    Slowly but surely I work the bar down to it’s last,
    As I eat away at it’s frozen delight.
    I take the last bite…
    It’s the only slightly chewy bite,
    As it’s taken the whole length of writing this poem,
    To break it down to a well deserved breakfast.
    So I chunk the wrapper,
    Pick my teeth with my tongue,
    And then move to brush my teeth.
    Next time I get a candy bar and keep it….
    It’s going in the refrigerator... (Laughs)

    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    were u bored when u wrote this? It's cute, very leisurely
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    wow. intresting poem. i didnt know you could make poems like that. its different
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    no, I wasn't bored... I just was totally inspired to write. I wrote this, and 3 others in like 30 minutes. ...ok so maybe I was bored.. lol!!

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    This is pretty much a short story about a boring morning chopped up into sentence fragments.
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    shade i thoguht it was awesome...ignor ppl like lupus...he/she/it is just jealous or everyones talent.....including your and mine...dont let anyone discourage you!!

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    Lupus is right, you know.
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    I have more talent right now than you'll ever have. Both of you. Combined. Multiplied by your mental age.
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