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    Quote Originally Posted by Lupus Yonderboy
    I have more talent right now than you'll ever have. Both of you. Combined. Multiplied by your mental age.
    Be mature.. please. I write like I do for a reason... It's my style. As for talent... that's not talent, it's heart. And it you don't like my stuff... please then don't read it. I am asking you nicely Lupis. If you don't like Shakespeare... don't buy Romeo and Juliet. simple as that.

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    nicely put shade...im pming you now.... read it if you havent already. you have more talent in your finger than he can dream about and im sure his/her/its mental age cannot be counted by the tenths...ive tried the polite approach shade...it doesnt work......
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    It might come from the heart, but it's still nothing but a cleverly indented anecdote.

    And there's nothing else to read here.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lupus Yonderboy
    This is pretty much a short story about a boring morning chopped up into sentence fragments.
    one more thing I forgot Lupis.... If you read it carefully, it's actually sentences. I put comma's to mean the sentence continues... I put periods to end a sentence. That's what makes my stuff like it is... So please comment with care....

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    You just destroyed yourself.
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    Lupus really has no taste in writing, C'mon bro give it up u jealous
    Justin that was a very good poem, I enjoyed it
    Last edited by N.Y._Soulja; Jun 08, 2005 at 09:08 PM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lupus Yonderboy
    I have more talent right now than you'll ever have. Both of you. Combined. Multiplied by your mental age.
    Quote Originally Posted by animechick
    nicely put shade...im pming you now.... read it if you havent already. you have more talent in your finger than he can dream about and im sure his/her/its mental age cannot be counted by the tenths...ive tried the polite approach shade...it doesnt work......
    This is the only time I'm going to say this, and it goes for EVERYBODY who posts in this section and/or comments on another person's work. Keep your comments focused on the work in question and DO NOT turn it into an attack on the author. I'm tired of reading this petty sniping and I'm ready to send the lot you on a two-week vacation from the site, and I'm talking about EVERYBODY who posts a comment.

    If you post something on this site it is subject to comments that are both good and bad. You can either be grown up about the fact that you can't please everybody or you can start your own website, post your stuff there and regulate comments 'til your hearts content.

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    My comment wasn't meant to be taken seriously, you know.
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