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    Otaku esthered may be famous one day esthered may be famous one day esthered's Avatar
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    Trapped [P]

    Trapped

    Lonely, square cage.

    Endless heartbreaks.

    My mind whirling endlessly,

    Searching for a road;

    Which will lead me to dignity.

    How will I ever know

    When my tears won't flow?

    The every beat of my heart

    Pierces me like a dart.

    Afraid, confused, turning to every corner.

    To find that each end is blocked with a border.

    Falling onto a cold, hard floor,

    It seems that life is tearing me apart more and more.

    It is now time to say goodbye;

    For my soul is now ready to fly.

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    Banned Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki may be famous one day Kikinaki's Avatar
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    This one really blowed me away, especcialy the ending. I guess you possess the talent to write poems. It's a nice one Esthered.

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    Yea! I liked this one, too! You've got a great talent! Keep 'em coming

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    nice work good job

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    Hmmm.......Nice done, i like it.

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