Hey, I love this one. It's very nice. I especially can feel how you came about this one. It was touching to say the least. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. In fact I'll read this one again.
i carry your heart with me[i carry it in my heart]i am never without it[anywhere i go you go, my dear; and whatever is done by only me is your doing, my darling]
i fear
no fate[for you are my fate, my sweet] i want no world[for beautiful you are are my world, my true] and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant and whatever a sun will always sing is you
here is the deepest secret nobody knows
[here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which
grows
higher than the soul can hope or mind can hide]
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart[i carry it in my heart..]
Last edited by Wrath; May 15, 2005 at 07:21 PM.
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Hey, I love this one. It's very nice. I especially can feel how you came about this one. It was touching to say the least. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more of your stuff. In fact I'll read this one again.
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
Like justin said, this is very good.
Thank you, I wrote it a few weeks ago along with some others Ill post more later...Well Thanks!!![]()
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wow that's a great poem it touched my hearth, keep it up wrath. lol
another lovely poem nice work
awesome poem... so deep... i can relate... nice one!
"Dim vales- and shadowy floods-
And cloudy-looking woods,
Whose forms we can't discover
For the tears that drip all over!
Huge moons there wax and wane-
Again- again- again-"
Edgar Allan Poe
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