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    True to You

    Whenever I need a helping hand
    You will always be there for me
    When I fall,
    You pick me up and taught me how to stand again
    When I’m feeling down,
    You guide me and showed me how beautiful the world could be

    I owe my heart and soul to you
    Without you,
    I wouldn’t feel safe when the wind blows violently
    Without you,
    My sacred armor,
    I am nothing.

    As time passed
    We drifted apart
    Days, weeks, months
    They all went by unnoticed

    Every time it rains
    It reminds me of you
    Every time I hear that lullaby
    It reminds me of your voice

    Upon your dusty grave
    I say this to you
    If there’s anyone out there that you can trust
    It’ll be me
    I shall forever be true to you
    Only true to you.

    yeesh..tis suks...doesnt rhym at all...

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    Re: True to You

    Awesome, and touching too!

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    Re: True to You

    I like it. It's a loving poem. Everyobe is in love now these days.
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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    Re: True to You

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. K
    I like it. It's a loving poem. Everyobe is in love now these days.
    I think its more on parents, childhood etc

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip
    I think its more on parents, childhood etc
    Well now I'm lost. I was feeling the love. That's all.
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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    Re: True to You

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. K
    Well now I'm lost. I was feeling the love. That's all.
    The point is, the poem is touchy and sweet ^_^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip
    The point is, the poem is touchy and sweet ^_^
    In my finishing act. Yes Rave_Grip you are so true. so true.
    ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤
    You know how you drown a blonde, Rosalie? Glue a mirror to the bottom of a pool.
    Jacob Black, Breaking Dawn, Chapter 14, p.271
    Lamie Hynamen "I reject your reality and substitute my own."

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    Re: True to You

    Dam Elie, forget abt it not rythming. Tht was a jus pure emotional poem.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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