True to You

elie26 · Mar 25, 2006, 03:34 AM

Whenever I need a helping hand
You will always be there for me
When I fall,
You pick me up and taught me how to stand again
When I’m feeling down,
You guide me and showed me how beautiful the world could be

I owe my heart and soul to you
Without you,
I wouldn’t feel safe when the wind blows violently
Without you,
My sacred armor,
I am nothing.

As time passed
We drifted apart
Days, weeks, months
They all went by unnoticed

Every time it rains
It reminds me of you
Every time I hear that lullaby
It reminds me of your voice

Upon your dusty grave
I say this to you
If there’s anyone out there that you can trust
It’ll be me
I shall forever be true to you
Only true to you.

yeesh..tis suks...doesnt rhym at all...

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 25, 2006, 03:35 AM

Awesome, and touching too!

*Mr. K* · Mar 25, 2006, 03:58 AM

I like it. It's a loving poem. Everyobe is in love now these days.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 25, 2006, 04:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Mr. K

I like it. It's a loving poem. Everyobe is in love now these days.

I think its more on parents, childhood etc

*Mr. K* · Mar 25, 2006, 04:06 AM

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Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

I think its more on parents, childhood etc

Well now I'm lost. I was feeling the love. That's all.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 25, 2006, 04:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. K

Well now I'm lost. I was feeling the love. That's all.

The point is, the poem is touchy and sweet ^_^

*Mr. K* · Mar 25, 2006, 04:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

The point is, the poem is touchy and sweet ^_^

In my finishing act. Yes Rave_Grip you are so true. so true.

*Blade X* · Mar 25, 2006, 07:08 AM

Dam Elie, forget abt it not rythming. Tht was a jus pure emotional poem.

Nameless Shadow · Mar 25, 2006, 01:55 PM

Im touched whimper whimper. No just playing its great!

BrightShadow_96 · Mar 25, 2006, 02:08 PM

it's nice. poems dont need to ryhme. i liked it

AniManga Hound · Mar 25, 2006, 02:11 PM

Poems don't have to rhyme. I hope you know that.

Mar 25, 2006, 03:34 AM	#1 (permalink)
elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	True to You Whenever I need a helping hand You will always be there for me When I fall, You pick me up and taught me how to stand again When I’m feeling down, You guide me and showed me how beautiful the world could be I owe my heart and soul to you Without you, I wouldn’t feel safe when the wind blows violently Without you, My sacred armor, I am nothing. As time passed We drifted apart Days, weeks, months They all went by unnoticed Every time it rains It reminds me of you Every time I hear that lullaby It reminds me of your voice Upon your dusty grave I say this to you If there’s anyone out there that you can trust It’ll be me I shall forever be true to you Only true to you. yeesh..tis suks...doesnt rhym at all... __________________
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Mar 25, 2006, 03:35 AM	#2 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,832	Re: True to You Awesome, and touching too! __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,213	Re: True to You I like it. It's a loving poem. Everyobe is in love now these days. __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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Nameless Shadow Newbie Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 73 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 160	Re: True to You Im touched whimper whimper. No just playing its great! __________________
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