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    Tryed By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    My heart goes out to you,
    Why wont you see it.
    You turn and don't care how deeply I feel.

    Is my heart not really there?
    Do you even know I am alive?
    What does it tell me?
    Why won't you let me live?

    I just want to feel real, not like a phantom.
    I don't know if I can take the rejection again,
    I've gone through this too much.
    I wanna talk, but you don't.

    Is it me, what am I saying?
    It's always me, if it isn't me,
    Then who can it be, huh?
    Never to be loved.

    "I am everything I thought I would never be,"
    That includes being alone and in pain too.
    I just wanted a chance.
    Nevermind, you don't care anyway...

    Too much pain with all these girls,
    Guess I was never meant to be loved.
    Just liked, that's it... liked
    It just gets to me.

    Take a deep breath Justin, just breathe,
    You'll get through this... again.
    And again....and again....and again.....


    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)
    "It's a poem, it's only a poem. About that time............. it strikes!!!!"

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Good Lord u come up with some of the most saddest poems ever! ;.; ur killing be brain! lol jk...neway, im sure one day ull be writing about romance instead...but for now...good luck ^^

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    Sorry... just a bad life thus far, I guess. I'm 22 and I've had about 7 years of pain. It'll change....... someday.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    "My heart goes out to you,
    Why wont you see it.
    You turn and don't care how deeply I feel."

    -sigh- Felt this before...Wasnt great. But this poem is great. I can relate. Lol.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Hmm u made me cry T-T. But i liked the poem nicely done
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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