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    Unbelievable

    Unbelievable

    It’s simply amazing,
    The things that you tell me.
    How else can I explain this,
    To the world.
    I give to you daily,
    And you give back to me too.
    Forever I will love you,
    My Rose Petal.
    You are an Angel,
    Will wings pure as snow.
    No, snow has nothing on your wings,
    As they have a heavenly glow.
    Your red mane,
    Bright as the sun in the morn,
    And your beautiful blue eyes,
    That stare at me with love.
    … love,
    That heart felt feeling,
    That I waited so long to feel.
    Now that you love me,
    I never want to let you go.
    This is just unbelievable to me…

    By: Justin McCormick (K' Heart)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    I really like the Rose Petal name do you actually call her that,thats very original this day and age. Love the poem by the way.
    This pain is sratching at my bone.
    And this Loneliness won't leave me alone.

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    i love this poem justin more then some of the others
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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    Nice one man, just a nice one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by roger_smith
    I really like the Rose Petal name do you actually call her that,thats very original this day and age. Love the poem by the way.
    If you check the date of the poem "Rose Petals" I started calling her that since that day. And that particular poem, like many, is true to it's words. She IS my little Rose Petal

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Great poem, i hope we have more in the future.

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    ok not to be a jerk but I like that you are tight and stuff, but I am about Amandraed out. And I have to see her every day.
    LOVE LIFE WORK PAIN SARROW AND THE GRACE OF THE ANGELS TO EVERYONE

    always and forever, through pain and sorrow, through love and joy

    A'Karuya (the young warrior)

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    Quote Originally Posted by A'Karuya
    ok not to be a jerk but I like that you are tight and stuff, but I am about Amandraed out. And I have to see her every day.

    well maybe he loves me so much that he wants to write about me. If you don't like them then don't read them
    LIFES NOT A GARDEN SO STOP ACTING LIKE A STUPID HOE.

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