Very emotional and lushly written. Good job
broken...
now sitting...
that's all i can do right now.
pain courses through my body.
I can't stand much,
or bend,
as such would mean,
my failing stature.
I ache from head to toe,
and my friends wonder,
why i'm insane.
i can't WALK!!
that's why...
what if you couldn't get up,
from your computer right now.
you had to get your mom/dad,
or your roomie,
to lift you off your chair.
Worse yet,
what if your like me and alone.
having to drag yourself to the fridge,
to prepare a meal,
and IF your strong enough,
lift yourself to the counter to fetch plate.
that's me when it's bad like this.
i'm better now,
but just imagine,
if you were me,
in this instance.
could YOU stand the pain?
i've had no choice.....
Justin McCormick (K' Heart)
"To understand my pain, is to LIVE WITH MY PAIN. no one can do that...physical or mental."
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
Very emotional and lushly written. Good job
Yea very emotional. I've sorta been going on and off breakdowns here. I laugh all day and cry all night. I think I'm going insane; but I'm still sane enough to know I'm insane. Is that possible? Anyway, I LOVE your poetry. Great poem.
Like the other two said its a great work of Emo, i think its great.
another great one piece!!!
Extremely descriptive of your inner pain. I totally understand. I felt like that before. Dragging myself out of bed... Forcing myself to the showers. Sigh. Cheer up soon! :]
I understand your pain but keep out of pain is to do something
dont you think and every body have an angel rigth beside them rigth
good work but don't lose hope on eny-thing remember every body in here is your friend
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